Monday, October 18, 2010

Brainy Pix: Adumbrate--DRAFT

4 comments:

  1. Hi Leah,
    Your brainy pix is really nice however I would make some changes about it. I liked the picture and it looks really nice and not fake. Also how you put word and the definition makes it clear what the picture is suppose to represent and what the word means. It is clear and precise and gets right to the point. However I don't understand why there is a dog in the picture and it doesn't really make sense. I suggest taking the dog out of the picture because it doesn't make sense. Also you could make a sentence that involves the meaning of the word along with the definition that will make the definition a little clearer.

    -Mikayla Domingo

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  2. Hey Leah,
    You did a good job on your brainy pix but there are some suggestions I would like to make. Most of the picture looks real except for the dog. Maybe the whole dog could be shadowed instead of half of it. Or you could take a picture of something small that is being shadowed and put in there. Also don't forget to put your sentence to match your word. But other than that good job.

    -Aldrin Osalvo

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  3. Sorry everyone, I forgot the caption. It should be: "The little puppy was adumbrated by the elephant's gigantic shadow."
    ~Leah Miyasato

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  4. Hey Leah,
    Your picture is very humorous with the small dog and the large elephant I also liked the relevance of the graphic. It did take a while for me to get (maybe that's just me) but i do think you should use another picture of a dog because the dog is extremely small also the placement of the dog is somewhat awkward at the top of the elephant.
    Keegan D.

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