GREAT GRAPHIC LEAH. :D I like how it really matches your poem. If you could add a little more pictures, that would be really great! You're very creative and I like the way you think. Anyway, it's really simple, which is good. Uhh.. I guess that's it? BYE.
Hi Leah, That is hilarious :) I laughed out loud when I saw the ace bandages and the Advil :) Although, given your new "footwear" I guess it's not really a laughing matter....like the little engine, though, you will surely make it through...smiling all the while :) My only recommendations deal more with the graphic...is there a way to make the train on a steeper slope? Perhaps if the background were enlarged, you could use perspective to give a feel for the steepness and the length of the journey that you are overcoming as the little engine? Just some suggestions, not requirements :) I think you've done a great job of representing your allusion via the images. mrs s
GREAT GRAPHIC LEAH. :D
ReplyDeleteI like how it really matches your poem. If you could add a little more pictures, that would be really great! You're very creative and I like the way you think. Anyway, it's really simple, which is good. Uhh.. I guess that's it? BYE.
-Lex
Hi Leah,
ReplyDeleteThat is hilarious :) I laughed out loud when I saw the ace bandages and the Advil :) Although, given your new "footwear" I guess it's not really a laughing matter....like the little engine, though, you will surely make it through...smiling all the while :)
My only recommendations deal more with the graphic...is there a way to make the train on a steeper slope? Perhaps if the background were enlarged, you could use perspective to give a feel for the steepness and the length of the journey that you are overcoming as the little engine?
Just some suggestions, not requirements :) I think you've done a great job of representing your allusion via the images.
mrs s