howzit Leah, I really like the poster. The title is very catchy and it makes sense with matching it with the baloons. It is very eye catching because you use bright colors. I think it is perfect as is and not many corrections are needed. Niiiice!!!
Hey Leah ! I love the theme of your poster ! Its very unique w/ all the balloons & the road; I would have never thought of balloons ! <3 You have great words that describe our "Coming of Age" assignment & it surely does fit in well w/ the rest of the graphics. But i would love to see your pictures more clearly on the final, maybe you should change the opacity of them or something to show all of the viewers that it's you. & also, to probably make your words a little bit BIGGER just so everyone can be able to read them. Overall, great poster draft ! It shows that you have worked really hard on it.
Hi Leah, I agree with your teammates; this is a very thoughtful and creative job! I see what Sziezel is getting at with the recommendation about your picture....what I would suggest, though, is to perhaps decrease the size of the "weight you down" part, and add a balloon that is floating up with your pic in full opacity...that would shift the emphasis from the obstacles to the attainment of COA, as well as show your image more clearly :) mrs s
howzit Leah,
ReplyDeleteI really like the poster. The title is very catchy and it makes sense with matching it with the baloons. It is very eye catching because you use bright colors. I think it is perfect as is and not many corrections are needed. Niiiice!!!
Bryson CASTRO
Hey Leah ! I love the theme of your poster ! Its very unique w/ all the balloons & the road; I would have never thought of balloons ! <3 You have great words that describe our "Coming of Age" assignment & it surely does fit in well w/ the rest of the graphics. But i would love to see your pictures more clearly on the final, maybe you should change the opacity of them or something to show all of the viewers that it's you. & also, to probably make your words a little bit BIGGER just so everyone can be able to read them. Overall, great poster draft ! It shows that you have worked really hard on it.
ReplyDelete<3~Sziezel Pascua
Hi Leah,
ReplyDeleteI agree with your teammates; this is a very thoughtful and creative job!
I see what Sziezel is getting at with the recommendation about your picture....what I would suggest, though, is to perhaps decrease the size of the "weight you down" part, and add a balloon that is floating up with your pic in full opacity...that would shift the emphasis from the obstacles to the attainment of COA, as well as show your image more clearly :)
mrs s